Thursday, October 30, 2014

Blog #12

Departure to Being a Scholar 
I am continually impressed 
By the patience in drawn creativity 
While writing for success 
The rituals of remarkable performance 
As their rhythm has endurance 
Original sin described like Clay Model of basic writing 
So do not discourse 
Inventing and arranging 
Don't forget finesse 
Scholars and Shepard's 
Giving departure to transform 
There is never exclusion 
Don't be disguised, offer up and be 
Recognized 
Show enormous amounts of power 
Then you can departure.


 I guess I wanted to communicate that I think writing is almost an art because of all the effort put into it. Writing in my opinion is a challenging thing to do and I wanted to communicate that it is okay and there is always room for improvement. Even if you're ashamed of what your writing is about it is valued to someone out there. Therefore, I think that if you keep writing it will eventually become close to perfect (Nothing nor nobody is perfect). I didn't really realize the deeper meaning of this poem until I read it, now. Everyone is born to do things and I think writing is not my strong point, but with the practice I'll get better. It is a motivational poem.

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