Two characters:
Simon the Cat
Sally the pony
Setting: a deserted island
Sally and Simon are stuck on
island surrounded by the never-ending ocean. The weather outside is very rainy
and humid. The only sound you can hear is the raindrops hitting the oceans
surface. Simon walks over to Sally and starts to snuggle up to each other
because of the harsh weather. Sally said to Simon, “Let’s stick together.” The
sun suddenly came out from behind the clouds giving to two friends hope. Simon
spoke out from his silence and said; “ I think this is a sign that we will not
be stuck on this island for long. Lets be honest a deserted island is no place
for a pony and a cat.” The sand started to warm up below their hooves and paws.
The sand to them felt a soft warm blanket, which was unexpected. They both
started seeing itty-bitty sea shells appearing all around them. The felt like
they were in Salvador Dali’s art piece “The Persistence of Memory.” Not only
because time was no longer important but because it was getting so hot they
felt like everything was melting away. Feeling overheated. Suddenly a futon fell from the
sky and they were stoked. Sally said, “
Where the heck is the futon store in the sky?” Simon asked Sally “ Why are they
giving out futons?” They had been there for many days and night they ran out of
fingers to count on, poor Simon and Sally. Sally was talking and then
suddenly—they saw a boat out at sea. It
was almost the spitting image of the show “Naked and Afraid.” Sally’s hair was an image majestic Willow
Tree, it was shiny and perfect. Suddenly the Animal Coast guard found them
alive and well and that is when Simon leaned over and whispered to Sally, “I
could not have survived without you, friend.”
I thought your character choice was very unique. I never heard of a friendship involving a cat, and a pony. You answered Professor Mckellar's questions well, and the flow of your story was on point the whole time. What made you think to set a cat and pony in a desert? Anyways, I enjoyed your story that made me look at cats and ponies in a different way.
ReplyDeleteYour story is so cute. Good imagination on the curve ball guidelines we had to follow. Of course you have to end the story with the friendship still in tacked and them getting off the island. Nice story Jordan.
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